i need an english teacher

[Capt.HuSsEiN]

Hello everybody
how are you doing
i hope you very good







my English is so bad...

this is something i wrote and i hope you
help me to correct my mistakes


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there is no such a pure love people keep saying
and i was so close to believe because of what I've been through,
suddenly i found myself falling in love with you
such a pure love as the pure snow
before it fall from the sky.
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i loved you as well as the hotness of hell. I suffered
from that as someone is deadly ill. but after all
one word from you makes my world extremely thrill

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know give me your opinion about it